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Wednesday 23 May 2018

A time I found a note in a bottle

One day I went to the beach with my family. There was my dad, my brother Max, and my cousin Nick. We were going fishing on our grandpa's boat. It was a really nice day for going fishing. We got our equipment for fishing. We got our fishing rods, and our bate so we could catch fish, and the rod Anchors so the fishing line can go down, and our life jackets.

When we got to Huia beach we pulled the boat off the boats tray, and pulled it in the water. Well my dad and my cousin and my brother was pulling the boat out, I found a bottle floating at the top of the water. I quickly grabbed  the bottle and opened the lid and took the note out. When suddenly it started getting windy. The note flew out of my hand. I tried to grab the note as fast as I could but I couldn't . I started getting scared when my dad said, come Sandy where going fishing now. I said not now dad, my cousin Nick and my brother Max said, why I said I found a bottle with a note in it. My cousin and brother said huh? I think some one needs our help I said.

So my dad, my cousin, my brother and I started looking for the note. It shouldn't  have gone far I said, my brother said yeah right. It was ages since we hadn't found the note. So my dad, cousin and brother went fishing with out me. I sat down buy the edge of the water and said only if I knew what was written on the note. Then I saw a peace of paper I thought it was just rubbish but I picked it up any ways, I looked at it properly and there it was I was holding the note. I read it and it said gotcha! I was like what . Then my cousin and brother started laughing. I said what's so funny. They said gotcha then we all started laughing. We went fishing for a little while. My brother caught one snapper, my cousin caught one silver fish, and my dad caught three silver fish and one snapper. 

We went home my dad cooked the fish well we were watching T.V. I caught nothing but I won't forget that day my cousin and brother got me. 

2 comments:

  1. That's a nice narrative Madisyn, turns out finding the note turned out to be a trick!

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  2. Hello Maddy. You wrote an amazing story about how you found a note in a bottle. When I found out that you'd been tricked I was confused. Keep up the good work!

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